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Thursday, 31 October 2013

My Touch Rugby By Patrick

This My Picture On Touch Rugby. This Week We Learnt The Ways Of How To Play Touch Rugby. Today We Lost Our Game Non-Bibs Won & Bibs Lost. How They Kept On Running Straight And Had Their Plans Sorted Out.We Are Still Learning How To Play Touch. Next Week We Are Versing Rm 7, Give Us Luck

Tuesday, 29 October 2013

My Maths Whizz Results By Patrick

This is my results on Maths Whizz results I have spent 60 minutes in total an 5 minutes on replay and 55 minutes on tutor mode

Friday, 25 October 2013

My Comment To Room 1 By Patrick

This is my comment to room 1 hope you look at this room 1

Wednesday, 23 October 2013

Peer Assessment Narrative Checklist By Patrick


Peer Assessment Narrative Checklist
Read over your partner’s work and judge their writing using the following criteria.

Narrative Criteria
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My partner has written an orientation

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My partner describes where the story takes place


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My partner has described when the story takes place
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My partner describes how the story begins
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My partner introduces characters
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My partner defines the characters’ personalities
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My partner describes what the characters look like

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My partner has created a problem that the characters experience
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My partner includes a resolution - how the problem / situation was solved
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My partner has written a final concluding statement

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My partner uses a variety of language features, e.g. active verbs, conjunctions, similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia, personification

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Peer Assessment Surface Features Checklist


Surface Features Criteria
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My partner writes in full sentences
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My partner sequences his/her ideas clearly
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My partner uses complex sentences

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My partner varies sentence beginnings

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My partner uses conjunctions e.g. “and” correctly

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My partner uses capital letters correctly throughout writing

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My partner uses full stops correctly throughout writing
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My partner spells all words correctly

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My partner proof reads his / her writing
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My partner edits his/her writing-by making changes to the vocabulary e.g. said - yelled, asked, etc.
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My partner writes in paragraphs
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This is Peer Assessment Narrative Checklist count how many smiley faces I have got from my partner Raymond

My Results On Xtra Maths By Patrick

This is my results on Xtra Maths I have got 22 again for today for racing the teacher

Tuesday, 22 October 2013

My Results On Xtra Maths By Patrick

This is my results on Xtra maths I have got 22 for today in a row. 


Monday, 21 October 2013