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Friday 12 April 2013

The Red Poppy By Patrick


The night before the war.
The night before the war Jim wrote a letter to his family but he didn’t write that much because there wasn’t anything happening that much. He wrote his letter to his mum and his sister Edith who has a pet cat.
Jim didn’t even mention all of the yucky things he saw.

Jim and a couple of soldiers were marching silently to the trenches. It was 5:30 and the men’s were waiting silently in the trenches.A 10 minutes later the battle field got silent and they were confused.

6:18 they got ready because they heard some noise. 2 Minute later they saw the enemies shoot a bullet and they got ready FIRE they fired and fired a humongous sound made Jim jump with a fright.

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